Within our Media Studies class, we each took turn to watch each others' draft films. We then wrote down what went well in each of the films, as well as what could be improved. This allowed us to see if any improvements could be made to the film, as well as what we did well so that we can keep it up.
MUFFINS - BAD POTATOES STUDIOS
What Went Well:
Use of multiple camera angles for a scene
Music complements the scene
Mac muffins
Good cinematography
Very entertaining to watch - i like the character muffins
Good editing
Creative shots
Good focusing / focus pulling
Very stable footage
Funny
I like the comedy twist
Nice colors (Some scene still need color grading)
Interesting narrative
Even Better If:
Low sound quality in some dialogues
Some awkward silence
Color grading
Smoother transitions
Some scenes too dark
Some dialogue inaudible, hard to understand
Why you destroy rubber chicken ;-;
Music suddenly stops, when the door is seen open
Maybe you could fade the music out?
Choreography looks like they’re respectfully going one at a time
SINGULARIS PRODUCTIONS
What Went Well:
Range of camera shots and angles - good cinematography overall
Can see clearly the genre shown through mise en scene
Costume and props
Good action choreography
Good use of lighting to create suspense
Good location
Jason Bourne
Even Better If:
Background noise - dialogue echoes
Awkward silence
Some fight parts not smooth
Some scenes are too dark
AZURE - PAPILLION PRODUCTIONS
What Went Well:
Good acting
Good use of location + costumes
Color scheme
Good dialogue
Even Better If:
Filmed more scenes
Some shots are too shaky
Background noise
Weird focus
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